1. The secret room is dark,slimy and scary. 2. At the stairs bloods are all over a dead body. 3. Upstairs there are lots of skull and cross bone. 4. At the toilet it is smelly because there is lots of disgusting water. 5. In the kitchen there is lots of TNT and dynamite that had been exploded by an army called England.
The secret room were beautiful as a heaven. The secret room has a lots of flower that colourful and bright. The bedroom has many toys that alive. The kitchen has a babysitter that make lots of cakes and cupcakes.
The secret room has a chocolate factory inside. The secret room has a choco river. The secret room has trees from cotton candy. The secret room has flowers from candy. It has plants from cocacola and merinda.
One day, when Kate went out,she heard a strange noise from the barn where a cow lived .She got curious and went inside and saw a secret door!.She opened it gently and saw many mirrors on the right and many dinosaur skeletons on the left.She noticed that this room was leading to a cave. And in the cave there was a haunted house with ghosts in it. Aargh! she ran away very frightened.
1. The secret room is dark,slimy and scary.
ReplyDelete2. At the stairs bloods are all over a dead body.
3. Upstairs there are lots of skull and cross bone.
4. At the toilet it is smelly because there is lots of disgusting water.
5. In the kitchen there is lots of TNT and dynamite that had been exploded by an army called England.
Great use of adjectives - it certainly paints a picture - you've scared me Ikhwan!
DeleteFeels like a horror novel
DeleteHaneea Yoosuf
The secret room were beautiful as a heaven.
ReplyDeleteThe secret room has a lots of flower that colourful and bright.
The bedroom has many toys that alive.
The kitchen has a babysitter that make lots of cakes and cupcakes.
A lovely simile Husna, well done!
DeleteI wish I was in your secret room,Husna
DeleteHaneea Yoosuf
The secret room has a chocolate factory inside.
ReplyDeleteThe secret room has a choco river.
The secret room has trees from cotton candy.
The secret room has flowers from candy.
It has plants from cocacola and merinda.
mmm scrumptious
DeleteHaneea Yoosuf
ReplyDeleteHaneea Yoosuf Grade 3
The Secret Room
One day, when Kate went out,she heard a strange noise from the barn where a cow lived .She got curious and went inside and saw a secret door!.She opened it gently and saw many mirrors on the right and many dinosaur skeletons on the left.She noticed that this room was leading to a cave. And in the cave there was a haunted house with ghosts in it. Aargh! she ran away very frightened.